I have read your letter, and feel that it strikes a very neutral and balanced tone (which is good - it's not angry or accusative). It sets out a number of very good points, well presented.
Having said that, it is a bit long, and worry that GWR may not have time to read it or may not read it properly; however. I'm not sure what you can omit - all of it is relevant and succinct. Maybe you could put in paragraph headings / numbered paragraphs to alert the reader of the content in the ensuing paragraph. This may help if different people have to respond to it - e.g. staffing issues, disability and access issues etc.
Sorry, can't advise on email or postal addresses.
Hi
Thanks for taking the time to read the letter and for the feedback. As I’ve already e-mailed it to some GWR e-Mail addresses do you think I should still try and change it before sending the posted copies?
I think your idea is a good one - I didn’t think of titling the different parts.
If I’m going to do this I think I’d need to think it through eg what titles to use and where to put them.
Any suggestions on this from you or anyone else greatly appreciated.
I was going to try and get it posted today but I think I will now leave it till tomorrow to give time for anymore feedback/assistance re your suggestion and for me to work out what to do.
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Hi All
I realise this is quite a long thread now and I don’t know if anyone is still interested but unfortunately I could still do with a listening ear/some support so I thought I’d update.
On Thursday I received an e-mail from my MP’s office saying that they hadn’t heard any further from GWR and they were going to give them a bit more time as they wrote to them on 17th April and usually allow 4 weeks for a reply.
Friday I received the following e-mail from GWR:
Hi Kath
Thanks for sending over the letter and adding myself to the conversation. I have read it through and spoke with relevant people within GWR. I feel the best approach would be to have a meeting and go through each point in person. I think that it is likely that the answers to the questions you have asked may have follow up questions therefore easier to do in person. I also think it would be beneficial to have the station manager along, who can answer some of the station specific points.
Looking at my diary Wednesday 28th May would suit me. I will need to check with the station manager on this date but hopefully it works, especially with all the holidays this month.
Once we have a date I think we can look at place.
Kind regards
(Name redacted)
Accessibility Manager
I’m grateful for the e-Mail response but I guess it leaves me with 4 main thoughts:
1. It seems that the provisional meeting date isn’t until at least the 28th May and may be further away. This seems a long way away, giving me a long time to worry get anxious and be left with no answers but I guess it also gives me time to prepare thoroughly.
2. I’m guessing that the fact they feel that the answers to my questions may lead to follow up questions means the answers they are going to give me are less likely to be the ones I’d be hoping for/prefer so this is making me anxious.
3. The last sentence ‘Once we have a date I think we can look at place’ makes me think they aren’t comfortable/happy to accept my local MP’s office offering us to use their meeting room. Does this mean they aren’t comfortable/dont want the MP’s caseworker there? I feel I need some support for the meeting and I don’t know what other alternative support I could source if this is the case.
4. I’ve nothing against discussing the answers to the questions in person but obviously then I’m aware that I won’t have them in writing to fall back on so I guess I should either ask GWR to send a summary of the answers/meeting to me after we have it or ask whoever supports me at the meeting to take minutes. I don’t feel able to take minutes myself really as due to my visual impairment I need to use a lot of focus and concentration when typing things out and I want to be able to talk - I don’t feel I could do both successfully at once!
I did a day return journey from Yeovil Pen Mill Friday and I have been a bit concerned about part of my experience there.
I got there in the morning and a member of staff from the station assisted me onto the train and helped me find a seat. We then had the following conversation:
Me: ‘Will anyone be here later?’
Staff member: ‘What time are you coming back?’
Me: ‘18:20
Staff member: ‘We’ll be gone by that time. Speak to the guard.’ Then as the train was about to go, I thanked them for helping me, we said goodbye.
This conversation upset me a little bit. I had carefully planned my day trip to Bournemouth around Yeovil Pen Mill’s staffing hours. When I’d booked assistance by telephone a week in advance the call centre in Sheffield had told me assistance would be available from station staff at Yeovil Pen Mill both ends of my journey, my confirmation e-mail reflected that and the National Rail website page for the station contained no notice of short staffing. Although I accept my outward journey was early on Friday morning the assistance booking had clearly not been read by the member of staff at the station or they wouldn’t be asking me what time I was coming back.
As I knew the train on the way back was likely to come in on the platform the Ticket Office side of the station (not over the stepped footbridge) I felt I could manage with guard only assistance providing the guard knew about it obviously and I was upset it hadn’t been discussed and confirmed properly eg when I booked assistance and I was only told this would need to be the case right at the last minute on the day AFTER I ASKED if anybody would be at Pen Mill on the return as per the conversation above.
A few weeks ago another member of staff at the station did say to me that they feel if I’m travelling back to Yeovil Pen Mill from Weymouth direction they do feel it’s best the guard does the assistance not the station even if somebody is there. I don’t know why this is. I think it might be because that side of the station I can manage with guard only assistance (help off train, tell me to go left or right to exit) and sometimes the guards have been very on it (I love on it guards!) and get there before them but I feel if they want the guard to do the assistance that needs to be how the assistance is booked, in my confirmation e-Mail and clearly communicated to the guard in anticipation. Does that sound reasonable?
Also Friday I was upset because obviously the conversation above indicates the station had reduced staffing hours AGAIN that day (with no relief cover) as the Ticket Office should be open until 18:25 and then they close and cash up etc (I’ve been told previously someone should be at the station until about 7pm weekdays.)
I telephoned GWR’s Accessibility Manager and they said they would contact the station team to clarify if Yeovil Pen Mill were not going to be staffed their scheduled hours and who was providing my assistance when I returned there. I spoke to the Accessibility Manager at 10:17. At 13:38 they sent me the following text message ‘I have sent a message to the train manager so she is aware of the situation. Will keep chasing the stations as not heard from them. Definitely something to raise when we have our meeting with the station manager.’ I was grateful to the Accessibility Manager for trying to contact the station and for contacting the guard. Surely it is concerning though that an Accessibility Manager could not manage to get hold of Yeovil Pen Mill during their scheduled opening hours?
During the journey back from Weymouth to Yeovil a member of staff on the train introduced themself to me and they used to do my assistance sometimes at Pen Mill last year as they worked at the Ticket Office but are now training to be a guard. I felt embarrassed that I had not been able to recognise their voice and I don’t have enough sight to be able to recognise people visually. They helped me off the train and confirmed which way I needed to go to the exit so all was ok.
I wonder if Yeovil Pen Mill knew who the guard was going to be and had already spoken to them? But if so why didn’t they tell me? It could have saved a whole day of anxiety!
Thanks for reading if you got this far.